I guess I have no life!

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Then I've no life. I have not seen any movies. I swa one movie last year in which Natalie Portman stars. I might have seen some movies on TV. Not that many. May be about three in a year. I've been thinking of writing a book. I start writing. But never finish it. he reason is my story gets finished in some thirty pages. I don't know how to stretch a story. This author has written a bbok "The woman who walks in to door" illustrates a good way to stretch the story. He begins with a knoock on the door of a woman. There is a cop visiting the woman to tell her her husband is dead. But the author fills four chapters before the cop really tells her what he came to tell and another four chapter before he tells her how he died. In between the author tells that she threw her husband out. He takes some four chapters to tell why and how she threw him out. There are chapters about how she met her husbnd and how she got married and how she was glad to get out of her home because of her father. But don't get it wrong. She fights her eldest sister who always criticizes there father. She would do any thin to defend tye father although she married a no ggoder to get out of his house. I wish I could stretch my story to fill some 350 pages.

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